To all my blogging friends and followers. I wrote this story as an assignment for a course I am taking, but I wondered if anyone would offer me a short (just a couple of lines) review in the comments section?
The story is just under 3000 words, approximately ten pages of double spaced text and it is far from perfect, edited once, but in my opinion something is missing…
Will happily review short stories for others in return (please mention in comments).
Thank you to all possible reviewers.
Writing and Rhythm 